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-### Pros and Cons on turning 3.4-i386 into a bug-fix-only release with LTS for about 2 years, but no more feature updates
+### Pros and Cons on turning 3.4-i386 into a bug-fix-only release with LTS for a defined period of time (e.g. 2 years), but no more feature updates
 
 
   * #### Pros
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-### Pros and Cons on keeping i386 alive in the same way as it is now (e.g. there will be a i386-3.6 release, etc), but announcing i386 EOL for end of 2014.
+### Pros and Cons on keeping i386 alive in the same way as it is now (e.g. there will be a i386-3.6 release, etc), but announcing i386 EOL for end of 20xx (e.g. 2014).
 
   * #### Pros
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