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 ### Major VM SMP work
 
-Previously the majority of the VM was under a single token, the vm_token; now vm_objects (mappable entities) are each under a private token, concurrent page faults in the same object can proceed, and VM SMP scalability overall improved. Results for Postgres and MySQL, among others, are excellent.
+Previously the majority of the VM was under a single token, the vm_token; now vm_objects (mappable entities) are each under a private token, concurrent page faults in the same object can proceed, and VM SMP scalability overall is improved. Results for Postgres and MySQL, among others, are excellent.
 
 Francois Tigeot [worked on benchmarks](http://leaf.dragonflybsd.org/mailarchive/kernel/2011-11/msg00004.html) comparing DragonFly 2.10 and DragonFly 2.13, among other operating systems.  The resulting graphs show how well DragonFly responds to multiple CPUs on a 24-threads Xeon system.  (2.13 is the development version of DragonFly that became 3.0.)